Here’s a follow up on the last essay on the Treaty of Versailles…
To what extent were the German criticisms of the Treaty of Versailles justified?
The German criticisms of the Treaty of Versailles are to a large extent justified, and to a small extent unjustified.
The War Guilt Clause is one of the major arguments by the Germans that can be justified. The clause had claimed that Germany and her associates were SOLELY responsible for the outbreak of war, and thus had to shoulder the responsibility of reparations. However, war is a collective responsibility of all belligerents, which leaves the Germans’ criticisms justifiable.
Because of this, she had to shoulder all the responsibility and had to pay reparations. The paradox of this was that war has to be fought among two or more parties. There is no war if there is only one party involved. Therefore it can be said that war is a collective responsibility of all belligerents. So, the Germans’ criticisms on this clause can be largely justified.Another German criticism that can be justified is the one on disarmament. The disarmament clause requires Germany to disarm, restricting her army to…. about 100,000 troops. It can be argued that for a huge country like Germany, an army of 100,000 troops is barely enough to keep law and order in the country. It can also be argued that the Germans’, though the losing country, still ahs the right to self-defense in the event of an invasion. There was also no all-round disarmament of all the countries. Only the losing countries were asked to disarm. I feel that Germany has a very strong case against this clause.
The last German criticism which I feel is largely justified is her lost of territories in Europe. It can be argued that losing its territories in Europe is the lost of its sovereignty, the people and productive land. The German colonies were also indirectly colonized through the mandate system. The system can also be questioned as to why is there no plebiscite for the Germans’ newly drawn frontiers or states. It can also be questioned as to why union bet between Austria and Germany is not allowed. It is largely a case of denial of self-determination to the people of the defeated country. The lost of territorial land to other countries also created problems for the Germans living there. When the territories were merged with the new ruling country, the Germans became the minority. Thus they were ignored most of the time. Thus, the Germans has a very strong point against this.
Although German criticisms are to a large extent justified, there are, to a small extent, certain German criticisms that are not justified.
It was argued by the Germans that the Treaty was a dictated peace and many provisions are not based on Wilson’s 14 points. This arguments can be counter argued as Germany themselves had applied the same treatment to Russia at the Treaty of Brest-Litovsk in 1918. Germany would also no doubt dictated peace if they had won the war. Its argument that many of the provisions were not based on Wilson’s 14 points can be rebuked as the Germans themselves had originally rejected Wilson’s 14 point. Therefore, she had to make unconditional surrender based on the terms laid by the Allies. Moreover, the 14 points were also never accepted as official by any of the states involved. Therefore, I feel that the Germans do not have much stand in its criticisms against these particular terms and thus, is unjustified.
Germany also argued that the reparation costs were beyond her economic capacity and thus renounced it as a “slave treaty”. The Germans’ criticisms can be counter argued by the fact that war damage and cost to the Allied forces were 2.5 times more than the Central Powers. Germany’s post-war crisis is due to extensive war debts or even due to deliberate engineering of German government (inflation) and not because of reparation costs. Germans’ economy potential also remained favorable even after war in comparison with the Allies as the war was waged mostly outside her soil. The Germans had also no grounds for complain as the Allies did make revisions and rendered other assistance to revive the German economic viability. Germany also received more loans than it paid out. Its economic recovery in 1929 also proved that the effect reparations were punitive. Therefore Germany did not justify its criticisms against the reparations.
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This is a mock question which was given in my History class a few years back.
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Maximum mark for this type of question is 6, while the main essay would be worth a maximum of 14 marks, giving a maximum total of 20 marks.






I am writing an essay critiquing the treat of versailles for school.
i found this very helpful as a source for my essay.
it would be great if you could include an alternative agreement that would have been better for all the countries, and if you could also mention how the treaty of versailles affected history.
The essay is targeted at the question I was given… so having an alternative agreement would be out of the context of that question.
On that note, the Treaty of Versailles affected the German’s more than the rest due to its disarmament clause. Thus the focus on Germany.
If needed, probably you can mention about the Treaty being seen as a victor’s treaty. The part about not following Wilson’s 14 points can also be taken as a argument for other countries..
EDIT: On how it affected history, probably its worth a mention that it did affect how WWII was handled after it ended as no one wanted a repeat of the repercussions the Treaty of Versailles had caused.
well then it was very well done
Although I find this article somewhat useful (relative information and analysis provided), but the introduction and conclusions are VERY shallow:
“So, the Germans’ criticisms on this clause can be largely justified.”
“I feel that Germany has a very strong case against this clause.”
“Thus, the Germans has a very strong point against this.”
“Therefore Germany did not justify its criticisms against the reparations.”
Okay…. Can you give an example or suggest what might be a better answer? It would be more helpful for the readers.
The way you are writting is time-consuming,indirect and you can’t hit the maximum marks for such an essay.i.e,this whole chunk of information can be simplified”The paradox of this was that war has to be fought among two or more parties. There is no war if there is only one party involved. Therefore it can be said that war is a collective responsibility of all belligerents. So, the Germans’ criticisms on this clause can be largely justified.”Try to hit the point i.e Germany blames that they should not be totally responsible for the war,other Europrean powers should also take the blame as they were also involved in the war.And then elaborate..
Point noted.
I’ll highlight your comments in the essay above…
(p.s. I won’t be editing the essay as it was so long ago unless there are factual inconsistencies).